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Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, June 18, 2013 by carl conrad

carl conrad — Tue, 18 Jun 2013 22:26:02 +0000

I have to admit, I don’t get this one. Is the word “jellies” an active word, like something moving, or is it a thing, like little globs of the moon around the bay? And what are the “thousand little suns”? Sparkles on the water, or something like that? If so, Don’t they just disappear when the sun goes down instead of “drifting” into the night? I guess I’m just not poetic enough for this one, my friend from down under.

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Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, June 11, 2013 by Bill Cullen

Bill Cullen — Tue, 11 Jun 2013 17:05:13 +0000

Glad you enjoyed it. It was fun writing a poem about my childhood – Best – Bill C

Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, June 11, 2013 by typewriterpoet

typewriterpoet — Tue, 11 Jun 2013 16:42:45 +0000

enjoyed this i will be looking to the heavens for what should have been!

Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, June 11, 2013 by Bill Cullen

Bill Cullen — Tue, 11 Jun 2013 14:32:50 +0000

Ron – Thanks for your kind words – Best, Bill C

Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, June 11, 2013 by Ron.

Ron. — Tue, 11 Jun 2013 14:28:06 +0000

Brilliant work, Mr Cullen. Salute!

Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, May 28, 2013 by Bill Cullen

Bill Cullen — Wed, 05 Jun 2013 22:57:37 +0000

I love this poem. It’s a writer’s poem with a lovely classical allusion embedded in a simile. i could see someome framing this and keeping it on a writing desk as a reminder that any final beauty will always elude one’s grasp.

Comment on May 2013 • Volume 6 • Issue 5 by Robert

Robert — Sat, 25 May 2013 09:09:04 +0000

This is the best one yet.

Comment on Four and Twenty of The Week, April 23, 2013 by typewriterpoet

typewriterpoet — Fri, 17 May 2013 21:55:50 +0000

this is very clever!

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